2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇基本功很好，高级词汇表达也比较恰当；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。

As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, there are two people travelling on a small boat while discarding their picnic leftovers casually into a lake. Unfortunately, the lake has already littered with flowing rubbish like plastic bags, fish bones, banana peels, watermelon rind, bottles, tins, food wrappings, and so on.And below the drawing, there is a topic which says after the travel or "me" in the travel. Undoubtedly, the cartoonist has successfully depicted the phenomenon that several scenic spots are flooded with a great amount of people, who spoil the beauty of nature and leave behind a god-know-how-much trash. On the one hand, tourism, serves as an engine of the growth of economy has booming everywhere. Some people, laboring under the belief that tourism is the corn of one society's economy, seem to ignore the harm effect of tourism on the environment development. On the other hand, tourism has exerted negative pressure on the environment we are living in: water is polluted, the ecological system is disturbed and natural resources have been excessively used. From my point of view, tourism could not be banned in any country as it does help to shore up the economy in places which have few sources of income. However, the significant point is that the unchecked growth of the tourism may render the development of an economic unsustainable. It is high time that we enhanced people's awareness to rectify this by protecting the environment in generation.