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从句比例偏少，简单句稍微偏多了；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；作者能较多样的使用词汇表达，但要注意词汇拼写的检查。
The foreign friend is coming For me,English is interesting and I like chating with other in English .Thus,though the internight,I have a friend where comes from American.Her name is Amy.To mysurprised,she is going to China.She mentioned she want to visit Beijing and asked me weither I could as her guider. My anwer is "Yes".For this,I had made a plan that where I should taking her visiting.It can`t deny,the first place is the TianAnMen Square that the biggest square all over the world.Nest is the Great Wall,I will taking her to clambing the Great Wall.It can't mentioned all. After visiting,we will going to some restaraunt.The triditional food in Beijing is great,I think Amy will like it.
