5. 参考词汇:兼职记者 part-time reporter(s)
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累还不够,拼写错误也要注意。
From the Time Paper ,I have known the vacancy of valunteers,so I want to apply for the position of valunteer in Internatinal Animal Helpers. Now ,I'm a senior student in International Education school of Hubei University,since my weekend is free,I hope there could be some meanningful activities which like taking care of some animals in the International Animal Helpers.My little pet dog accoumpanied me spent most of my part time ,it gave me lots of enjoyment and love.I like spend weekend with this cute animals. What's more,I could arrive here within 10 minutes,because my home is not far away from there,this is quite convinient for me to share your work to look after animals in center.And my father is a doctor,I've learnt some medical konwledge form him,I can help some animals when they feel ill. At last ,I sincerely hope to have a chance to train myself in International Animal Helper.And there will be free before November 8,looking forward to your reply!