5. 参考词汇:兼职记者 part-time reporter(s)
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章用词灵活多样,但请注意增用高级词汇,单词拼写还要加强。
From the Time Paper ,I have known the vacancy for valunteer,therefore I want to apply for the position of valunteers in Internatinal Animal Helpers. Now,I'm a senior student in International Education school of Hubei University,since my weekend time is free,I hope there could be some meaningful activities which like taking care of some animals in the International Animal Helpers.My little pet dog accompanied me spent most of my part time ,it gave me lots of enjoyment and love.I like spend weekend with this cute animals. What's more,I could arrive there within 10 minutes,because my home is not far away from there,this is quite convinient for me to share your work to look after animals in center.And my father is a doctor,I've learnt some medical konwledge form him,I can help some animals when they feel ill. Lastly ,I sincerely hope to have a chance to train myself in International Animal Helper.And there will be free before November 8,looking forward to your reply!