5. 参考词汇:兼职记者 part-time reporter(s)
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,高级词汇的使用还有很大提升空间。
From the Time Paper ,I have known the position for volunteer,therefore I want to apply for the position of valunteers in Internatinal Animal Helpers. Now,I'm a senior student in International Education school of Hubei University,since my weekend time is free,I hope there could have a meaningful activity which like taking care of some animals in the International Animal Helpers.My little pet accompanied me most of my part time ,it have given me lots of enjoyment and love.I like spending weekend with these cute animals. What's more,I could arrive there within 10 minutes,because my home is not far away from there,this is quite convenient for me to share your work to look after animals in center.And my father is a doctor,I've learnt some medical konwledge form him,I can help some animals when they feel ill. Lastly ,I sincerely hope to have a chance to train myself in International Animal Helper.And there will be free before November 8,looking forward to your reply!