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When it comes to whether private cars should be taxed,I tend to support it.Below are reasons of it: First of all,it is a good way to reduce the number of private cars and it is of great benefit to easy the cities traffic condition.In addition,there is no doubt that private cars can cause air and noise pollution,so taxing private cars can indirectly protect the environment.Furthermore,the tax on private cars can be gathered by the government and it can be used to develop the public transport such as subway and bus. In a nutshell,we can tax private cars to better out city life.
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