5. 参考词汇:兼职记者 part-time reporter(s)
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
From the Time Paper ,I have known the position of volunteer,therefore I want to apply for the position of volunteers in Internatinal Animal Helpers. Now,I'm a senior student in International Education school of Hubei University,since my weekend time is free,I hope there could have a meaningful activity which like taking care of some animals in the International Animal Helpers.My little pet accompanied me most of my part time ,it have given me lots of enjoyment and love.I like spending weekend with these cute animals. What's more,I could arrive there within 10 minutes,because my home is not far away from there,this is quite convenient for me to share your work to look after animals in center.And my father is a doctor,I've learnt quiet a few medical knowledge form him,I can help some animals when they feel ill. Lastly ,I sincerely hope to have a chance to train myself in International Animal Helper.And I will be free before November 8. Looking forward to your reply!