2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Chinese educators have long aware of the importance of education to the nation. In China,there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this,I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China.i am a