2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

作者词汇基础不错，在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Emerging from this picture is an thought-provoking scene that internet, today, as one part of our daily life, its great impacts and benefits can’t be estimated. We can do much tings via it, such as, shopping, chatting with friends, even visiting families. Although Internet have giving me massive instant, we was further with our friends and kin. What’s worse, we gradual become indifferent to others. Apparently, one coin have two sides. It is deeply rooted in the mind of general public that internet act important role in my life, we will not live better if we don’t have internet. But is this public view still all-round? Cases against this opinion are abundant and with easy reach. It is not surprise to see adults visit parents via not go home but telephone or internet. It is not rare to notice that a young people stay at home for months not go out just because they have computer. Evidently, internet in the same time have bring us advantage and disadvantage. How can we put an end to the problem which internet has bring us? I deem we should adopt appositeness attitude to it. We can make the most of the merits of internet, not the disadvantage.