5. 参考词汇:兼职记者 part-time reporter(s)
作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用高级词汇;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
From the Time Paper, I have known the position of volunteer, therefore I want to apply for the position of volunteers in Internatinal Animal Helpers. Now, I'm a senior student in International Education school of Hubei University, since my weekend time is free, I hope there could have a meaningful activity which like taking care of some animals in the International Animal Helpers. My little pet accompanied me most of my part time , it have given me lots of enjoyment and love. I prefer spending weekend with these cute animals. What's more, I could arrive there within 10 minutes,because my home is not far away from there, this is quite convenient for me to share your work looking after animals in center. In addition, my father is a doctor, as a result, I've learnt lots of knowledge about medicine and disease form him, so I can help some animals when they feel ill. Lastly, I sincerely hope to have a chance to train myself in International Animal Helper. If there needs interviewing, I will be free before November 8. Looking forward to your reply!