2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(44)写作:自荐信

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From the Time Paper, I have known the position of volunteer, therefore I want to apply for the position of volunteers in Internatinal Animal Helpers. Now, I'm a senior student in International Education school of Hubei University, since my weekend time is free, I hope there could have a meaningful activity which like taking care of some animals in the International Animal Helpers. My little pet accompanied me most of my part time , it have given me lots of enjoyment and love. I prefer spending weekend with these cute animals. What's more, I could arrive there within 10 minutes,because my home is not far away from there, this is quite convenient for me to share your work looking after animals in center. In addition, my father is a doctor, as a result, I've learnt lots of knowledge about medicine and disease form him, so I can help some animals when they feel ill. Lastly, I sincerely hope to have a chance to train myself in International Animal Helper. Provided that there requires interviewing, I will be free before November 8. Looking forward to your reply!