5. 参考词汇:兼职记者 part-time reporter(s)
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。
From the Time Paper, I have known the position of volunteer, therefore I want to apply for the position of volunteers in Internatinal Animal Helpers. At present, I'm a senior student in International Education school of Hubei University, on account of the situation which my weekend time is on vacation, I hope there could have a meaningful activity as taking care of some animals in the International Animal Helpers to enrich my spare time. My little pet accompanied me most of my part time, it has given me lots of entertainment and love. I prefer spending weekend with these cute animals. What's more, I could arrive there within 10 minutes,because my home is not far away from there, this is fairly convenient for me to share your work attending to animals in center. In addition, my father is a doctor, as a result, I've learnt lots of knowledge about medicine and disease form him, so I can provide you some favor when animals feel ill. Lastly, I sincerely hope to have a chance to train myself in International Animal Helper. Provided that there requires interviewing, I will be free before November 8. Looking forward to your reply!