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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇量积累不错，高级词汇积累较少；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
All of us cannot escape dealing with money. Therefore, we must learn not only how to spend money but also how to save money. That is to say, we had better spend our money on something valuable. In my daily life, I usually buy ,of course I think, useful things. For example, I buy fresh fruits and have healthy meals. I think these are necessary for us to stay healthy. As for clothes, I just keep enough for myself. When the new year comes, I also receive my red envelope as most children do. My elder sister will buy beautiful clothes and delicious snack with the money. But I will not spend it on toys or clothes, I always give the money to my mother. My money will save for me. When I go to primary school, my mother buy varieties of pens and notebooks for me. I was extremely happy when my mother said it is paid with all your own money. Suddenly, I realized what a significant deal I have make! Above all, indeed, we should save money especially when we do not have to spent it. Only in this way we can make a good preparation at our urgent time.
