小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇量有些小，要注意检查拼写错误；简单句偏多了；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

He name is Lin Jinlong.He is one of my good friend.He is tall and handsome.Also clever.He study very hard.He is good at basektball.Sometimes he is hurmous.I love talk with he.Now he is studying in Xiamen College.But now i don't chat with him often.Because i think everyone all have ower life.