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The internet Internet plays important role in everybody's life. It has made a huge difference in the world, But the Internet has advantages and disadvantages. Fiest of all, The World Wide Web contains huge amount of information. It is extensive, relatively easy to access, and provides virtually unlimited information. If we need some information, We can acquire information online. The Web provides us an excellent resource to gain knowledge, From this way we can gain current information we need it now. Online education is very important in our life. It can gives us excellent resources of informations, save our time, money and it is estremely convenient. in addition, we also can exchange thougts, opinions and informations with our classmates without leaving our house. Sometimes,if we feel very stressed and depressed, we listen to songs,in order to we have a well-balanced life. But the Internet also has some harmful. Somebody indulges in the network games. They standing in the internet bar day and night, At tne end they leave uncultivated the studies. overall, internet has become an inseparable part of our life.Only when we can make it serve our needs. Can we benefit most from it. So, please use the internet in the proper way.
