2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者词汇量偏小，且拼写错误较多。

If a foreight frient gong to visit my hometown ,I will take him to some beautiful place in my honetown ,such as Yong Ji ecological park,Mei park,and so on.Yong Ji ecological have mang beautiful rurality,there have piant mang flower and grass,people like to visit in it ,it can take our different feei ,different with the city ,Yong Ji take our more gress,