2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If a foreight friend gong to visit my hometown ,I will take him to some beautiful place in my honetown ,such as Yong Ji ecological park,Mei park,and so on. Yong Ji ecological have many beautiful rurality,there have plant mang flower and grass,people like to visit in it ,it can take our different feel,different with the city ,Yong Ji take our more gress,