字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
In the middle of the picture, a bottle was spilt over with its contains flowing away. Seeing this ,two guys react in distinctly different ways. A man covers his eye with a hand and sighs with deep breath, saying,” it is all gone! “However, the other man reaching for it, smiles and says,” so luckily am I, there is still a bit left.” Simple as the picture is, it captures the essence of optimistic mind. The drawing illustrates how optimistic mind plays a pivotal role in individual success, especially when one confronts bad luck suddenly. Ask anyone what is truly the vital attribute of top performers,which separates the high achievers from the rest of pack, and the answer is always similar: keep optimistic to your life no matter what in the moment dampens your moods. An optimist is never easily defeated. The great musician Beethoven struggled against his deafness and composed the soul-stirring Fifth Symphony "Destiny", which could be interpreted as a saying that suffering is inevitable, but the courage and optimism to fight it render life worth living. Let me take the undergraduate entrance examination for another example. Even though the day-to-day preparation for the exam can be soul-crushingly hard and tired, we strongly believe the very things that right now dampen our moods can later be sources of intense gratification and delight. In a word, keeping optimistic is the pyramidal cornerstone for success. Therefore, we should realize its value and strive to pursue it. Just as Winston Churchill says,” The pessimist sees difficulty in every opportunity; The optimist sees the opportunity in every difficulty.”