2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

文章词汇表达丰富，不过请增加高级词汇的使用；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

I am very stoked that you are going to visit my hometown,China.I know you have a daesire to learning Chinese culture and the beauty of China,.Then,I will make a representation about the best place where I think in my hometown. GuiLin where is one of the wonderful place in my hometown.Remarkably,Guilin is famous for its mountains and water.The water is more clearer so that you can see the bottom of rivers easily.The mountains are tall,when you see them in a long distance ,you will find that they are endless.It is so funny and amazing.What'more,the people there are friendly.From my point of view,the enthusiasm of local people will make you comfortable. Are you dying to go to China after watching my letter?I am really looking forward to your arival!