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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句法方面做得很棒，但是从句不多。
If my university is now collecting opinions to improve the whole campus, I would like to make several suggestions. First of all, it is necessary for our university is filled with trees and flowers. It is of great benefit to our health. What 's more, suggestion boxes should be set up so that students can give advice anytime. Of course, the teachers not only accept these suggestions but also take some effective measures. Last but not least, the classroom and dormitory are equipped with some air conditioner. The reason for this is that students can live comfortable and study hard. In short, the university is supposed to take these suggestions into consideration. The student will have a sense of belonging when they at school.
