2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is a beautiful place .There is a park in my hometown ,which named the Lake of WangTian .There are many animals and flowers in the park.Otherwise,there are some places to relax like coffee shop.You can sit down and drink some coffee to enjoy yourself.Besides ,your children can play in the swimming poor or play some games in the beach.