高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分高级词汇；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；从句使用量不足。

when i was a young girl, i lived in a poor house and there was surrounded by the green trees and big hills. the street was limited by someone to across and many of the humans were so busy . but with the development of the world, more and more people are getting rich and many of them have private car .without the poor cities, on the contrary , what we have seen is surrounded by the buildings and factories.to our disappointed , every thing has two coins in the world.we are engaged in the modern life and convenient life .but we also have to face with the serious consequences. so the most important matters is to protect our environment and we will do our best to value our present life.