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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, many people like to judge a person by their appearance. They think a person's appearance can represent one's quality or something else. But it is unwise, my reasons are as follows. First of all, everyone has no choice but to accept their appearance given by their parents. Therefore appearence can't behalf of anything. Besides, what is the most important is a person's internal sprit and quality, rather than the external appearance. If a person has a kind heart and good qualities, he must be a charming man even if he looks poor. To sum up, we have to admit that the appearance of a person can leave a good first impression on others. But at the same time, we should also find the internal qualities of others and express our compliment on them. Only in this way can we create a harmonious society.

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