高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my home town years ago , my town was a beautiful palce.there are many trees around my town.Water in the river is very clean and many fish swimming in it.The houses are low and the streats are narray. Prople's life is hard.But now ,tall building and stores here and there, numbers of cars on the roads.but the evenriment is very bad, trees are less then before and the fishes are die out.It need to be handle immediately.