考研作文：人脑和电脑的不同

作者词汇基本功很好，高级词汇表达也比较恰当；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Many people, being busy with their online affairs, with different emotions hanging in their face, sit separately down in small and crowd cell, they seem close to each other but far from each heart. The caption under the cartoon says, "the Close and the Far of Internet". Conspicuously, what the drawer intends to remind us of is not an uncommon phenomenon which has far-reaching and profound implication. Serious concern about how the exert an enormous impact on our daily life can we infer from the picture immediately. In the several instances, we, indulging in Wechat, being enthusiastic to talk about something with strangers online and expressing opinions on the web, lose the desire to keep in touch with our friends or relatives in reality. What might account for this phenomenon? With the development of economy and technology, as well as education and culture, more and more people have access to enjoying the relaxation and convenience spring from the advancement of the Internet, but the flourish can not hide the disadvantages. Sparing more time on virtual world which means the reduction of contact in reality. Consequently, with the the lack of face-to-face communication, individuals' personal growth will surely be stunted, meaning that they can only obtain limited achievements rather than having become more distinguished in their life. Based on the above mentioned, I, therefore, will come up with an affirmative answer with no hesitation——"Absorb the essence and discard the dregs" is the best attitude we should take on the most controversial modern invention: Internet. Only in this feasible way can we have a more prosperous, democratic, civilized and harmonious socialist country, catering to the new development philosophy of China.