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考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:18浏览次数:3133
要求:

作文要求:

写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。

字数要求:

300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文中词汇使用灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Dear sir or Madam, I'm so delight to write this letter to come up with some suggestions for you to deduce the current production and use of plastic bags, which is supposed to vanish early. To be honest, although local government is determined to restrict the use of non-biodegradable bags, there, however, still are many regions existing "White Pollution". As an inhabition, I prepare to put forward two suggestions: for one thing, mass media, such as TV, radio, newspaper and so on, advacates the importance of using recycle bags' instead of pollution materials so as to enhance the public awareness of protecting environment. For another thing, it is necessary that we appeal to the supervision department to strengthen the laws and regulations concerning the environmental-friendly bags. I'm sure that if you take my advices into account, the circumance will be better. Thank you so much. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

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