考研作文：人脑和电脑的不同

从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中较熟练地使用高级词汇，但词汇量仍需积累；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

To reverse the undesirable behavior, we are supposed to appeal to the supervision department concerned to establish the laws and the regulations to prevent enterprises from making such blameworthy behaviors. Meanwhile, the regular people also should equip themselves with the discernable awareness of legilation. Only in this feasible way can we have a more prosperous, democratic, civilized and harmonious socialist country, catering to the new development philosophy of China.