Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词;作者词汇表达恰当灵活,另外请仔细检查词汇的拼写;文中从句使用过少。
from the picture we can know one thing that the education pays ofunemployment people of low degree more than higher degree.But for higher earning people,the situation reverse.There are average ofUnemployment rate in 2011 is 7.6percent.by contrast,There are Media weekly earning in 2011 is 797dollor. associate degree is a boundage.why the situation appear?I think,there are two reasons can compain.Frist,those pay for education know how to invest themself better.Second,they have a lots of leisure time than others. SO,Only study continuous can make us better!