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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

It is sunwise to judge a person by their appearance As a prevailing saying goes, "don't judge a person by appearance”. Undoubtedly, it reflects a current phenomenon that fewer individuals seem to attach due importance to the significance intrinsic factors. However, from my own opinion, we should put more emphasis on the quality rather than appearance. Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list. The best illustration might be currently over-packaged products in the markets. To put it more exactly, we may easily notice that the delicate packaged products may turn out to be of inferior quality. Exactly, it is the intrinsic factors that enable us to make reasonable chioces. In short, laying a solid foundation is crucial if we want to make achievements in our studies or work, or indeed in any other aspects of our lives. And what we should bear in mind is that essence matters most instead of "the first sight".

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