词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
My math teacher name is Mrs Li. She is a tall woman and has a beautiful body. She is a kind and smart teacher. When I take her class, I feel her class has fun and logic, my classmate have the same feeling as I am. I like her more than other teachers because I learned a lot of knowledge about math from her.