文中用词稍显贫乏;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;全文结构较为严谨。
My math teacher name is Mrs Li. She is a tall woman and has a beautiful body. She is a kind and smart teacher. When I take her class, I feel that her class has fun and logic, my classmate have the same feeling as I am. I like her very much because I learned a lot of knowledge about math from her.