题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文中用词稍显贫乏;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
On maintaining trust With the rapid develop of the society,the distance between man and man is further because people put material in the first place and ignore other things,including trust.For going for better material lives,people try do every way to get it and even cheat others. As the result of it,it is hard to keep people on maintaining trust.