若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词。
My dog calls Linda, she is 2 yeas old. She is small and has white fur. She is very clever and knows some human language and can understand what you say. She is much cut and everybody like her. Our family members like my dog very much because Linda makes everyone laugh.