小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

i have a good friend, her name is Zhaoman.she is very beautiful and has long hair.we met 10 years ago,and she likes me very much.she taught me how to be modest and the way to be industrious. i miss her very much cause she is in Xiamen right now which is far from beijing. i always want to show her my thoughts everyday,but i know i need to be independent considering she is very busy.