2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；从句使用量太少；语言不流畅。

August 15th of lunar calendar. This day is The Mid-Autumn in china. In the Mid-Autumn festival we will come home with our family. eating mood cookies, enjoy the full mood. some people will go to travel or to meeting their old friends. in the Chinese myth, a female immortal lives in the mood and one rabbit that make pills every day with her. she create the mood cake.