注意:
1.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
2.邮件首尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Dear Mike, glad to receive your letter, now I’ll show you my summer vacation plan. I should do sports first, Because I am a little fat. I will do sports every day, when I will be thin.Second, I will read many books which are good. I will help my parents to do some housework. It can improve me. Third,I will be a volunteer, when I will be free.I will help the poor. For example, I will help farmers to do something that I can do. I will help cleaner to clean the street. May you have a nice summer vacation!