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让提单；commercial invoice商业发票；weight list重量单；inspection certificate检验证书
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steamer ship班轮；documents单据
1．Please let US know your lowest possible prices for the relevant goods．请告知你方有关商品的最低价格。
2．We would like to mention that if your price is attractive and delivery date acceptable，We shall place a large order
with you．我们认为，如果价格合理，交货日期符合我们的要求，我们将大量订货。
3．Could you please send US a catalog of your garments together with terms of payment?您能给我们寄来一份成衣的目录，连同告知我们付款方式吗?
4．We are interested in your new product…and shall be pleased to have a catalogue and price list．我们对贵方的新产品极其感兴趣…希望能寄来贵公司的产品目录及价目表。
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From:Tian Liang To:Sir or Madam Date:Dec,23th,2008 Subject:Goods of Order 995 has been loading and will be shipped to your port by ship named"May flower" on Dec,25th,2008 Dear Sir or Madam, I am the general manager of xx foreign trade company .I am glad to inform you that the goods of Order 995 has been loading and will be shipped to your port by ship named"May flower"on Dec,25th,2008, which order No.is:995 ,letter of credit No.is:2085 .Now i send you the relevent documents,pls check attachment : --Export licence of No.147th ,one piece --Insurance policy of No.BGl7638,one piece --Non-negotiable B/L of No.1849,two pieces --commercial invoice of nO.28th,two pieces --Weight list of No.254th,one piece --Inspection certificate of No.1C889,one piece We believe that above goods will arrive to your side very well,meanwhile,we looking forward to further extensions of substancial business with you after this cooperation your sinicerely,
