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Last Sunday, I planted trees with my friends. They are my friends in daily life. We are the students of Grade One. We got there by bus. We waited each other at school on that day. We are very haapy to plant trees. We bought many trees at starday.When we get the momntion. Frist, we clmb to the top. Then we started to play the plant. We spend much time to finish playing the plant. we feel very tired but very happy at sunday.