增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词;文中词汇表达较为灵活,高级词汇需要加强,单词拼写要认真。
Last Sunday, I planted trees with my friends. They are my friends in daily life. We got there by bus as the students of Grade One We waited each other at school on that day. We are very haapy to plant trees. Many trees were bought by us last Monday.When we get the momntion. Frist, we clmb to the top. Then we started to play the plant. We spend much time to finish playing the plant. we feel very tired but very happy at sunday.