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Currently, there is a variety of digital products such as telephone, ipad, itouch are appearing which it brings the convenience for us. Undoubtedly, it is convenient for us to lead a happy life. What's more, with the development of science and technology, we have entered the era of information. In my opinion, there is an important impact on we have entered the digital age. Firstly, digital products bring more convenience from many diverse aspects such as our study and works. For instance, we can communicate with other people on the Internet by digital produvts. Secondly, we can shopping online by digital products which it can save our time and money. But on the contrary, we may be addicted in the digital products on some extent. Because digital products are too much convenient which will give rise to depend on the digital products on the extent. Last but not least, the Internet may announce the misleading information to lislead our thoughts. To summarize, when we have entered the digital age, the digital products are bringing the convenience everywhere. But we should realize a fact that the information from Internet isn't correct at all. Thus we should distinguish the information from the Internet on the digital products.