增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Last Sunday, I planted trees with my friends. They are my friends in daily life. We got there by bus as the students of Grade One. The bus driver waited for us at school on that day. We are very happy to plant trees. Many trees were bought by us last Monday. When we get the momntion. Frist, we clmb to the top. Then we started to play the plant. We spend much time to finish playing the plant. we feel very tired but very happy at sunday.