高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查；请注意分段。

Years ago, my town was a beautiful place.There are many trees around my town.Water in the river is extriemely clean and many fish swimming in it.The houses are low and the streats are narrow. Prople's life is different.But now,tall buildings and stores here and there, numbers of cars on the roads.However the everinment is very bad, trees are less than before and the fishes are died out.It needs to be handled immediately.