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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Last Sunday, I planted trees with my friends. They are my friends in daily life. We got there by bus as the students of Grade One. The bus driver waited for us at school on that day. We are very happy to plant trees. Many trees were bought by us last Monday. When we get to the mountain, we climbed to the top at the first. Then we started to plant the trees. We spend much time in finishing planting the trees. We feel very tired but very happy on Sunday.
