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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦162:Sunday

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:04浏览次数:1230
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根据所给词语,写出语法正确,意思连贯且不少于五句话的短文。 
sunny, last Sunday, the students of Grade One... 

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正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

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Last Sunday, I planted trees with my friends. They are my friends in daily life. We got there by bus as the students of Grade One. The bus driver waited for us at school on that day. We are very happy to plant trees. Many trees were bought by us last Monday. When we get to the mountain, we climbed to the top at the first. Then we started to plant the trees.After three hours, We spend much time in finishing planting the trees. We feel very tired but very happy on Sunday.

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