正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Last Sunday, I planted trees with my friends. They are my friends in daily life. We got there by bus as the students of Grade One. The bus driver waited for us at school on that day. We are very happy to plant trees. Many trees were bought by us last Monday. When we get to the mountain, we climbed to the top at the first. Then we started to plant the trees.After three hours, we finished the task of planting trees. We feel very tired but very happy on Sunday.