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Currently, there is a variety of digital products such as telephone, ipad, itouch are showing which it brings the convenience for us. Undoubtedly, it is convenient for us to lead a happy life. What's more, with the development of science and technology, we have entered the era of information. In my opinion, there is an important impact on we have entered the digital age. Firstly, digital products bring more convenience from many diverse aspects such as our study and works in the digital age. For instance, we can communicate with other people on the Internet by digital products in the digital age. Secondly, we can shop online by digital products which it can save our time and money. But on the contrary, we may be addicted to digital products on some extent. Because there is a fact that digital products bring too much convenience to us which will give rise to depend on digital products on the extent. Last but not least, the Internet may announce the misleading information to mislead our thoughts. To summarize, when we have entered the digital age, the digital products are bringing the convenience everywhere. But we should realize a fact that the information from the Internet isn't correcting at all. Thus we should distinguish the information from the Internet on the digital products.