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文章衔接手法恰当；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强。
My hometown is Guizhou province , which is a fabulous place in China . It is in the south of China , so there is pretty weather in Guiyang . In summer , you will feel much comfortable , because it is colder than other places in China . In winter,there still has many green and beautiful plants that make you amazing . Besides , there is a famous palce in Guiyang , it is Huangguoshu Pool . The visitor will be shocked by the marvelous picture . There are many dilicious food , Which will make people happy . I hope everybody can come there and have a good time .
