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Last Sunday, I planted trees with my friends. They are my friends in daily life. We got there by bus as the students of Grade One. The bus driver waited for us at school on that day. We are very happy to plant trees. Many trees were bought by us last Monday. When we get to the mountain, we climbed to the top at the first. Then we started to plant the trees.After three hours, we finished the task of planting trees. Although We spent so much time planting trees and felt very tired, we were still very happy on that day. Because we hold the view that it is important for us to protect the environment.
