- 分享到:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误；作者能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但拼写方面要再接再厉；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
With the rapid development of techololegy,people are involing the big net of internet.There are more and more people living with phones and computers.We have to agree that internet bring plenty of benefits to us.It makes human more convenient to communiate with the person who is far away from them.Besides,we can accquire a lot of knowledge and get many useful imformation from internet.However,one coin has two sides.Internet,phone and computer also take something harmful to us.Some teenagers and adults are addictted to them,which make them be far away from their parents and friends in reality.Someone even gives up studying and working.SO when we use internet to be better,we also should prevent harm from it.
