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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12877
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

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With the rapid development of technology, people are involving the big net of internet. There are more and more people living with phones and computers. We have to agree that internet brings plenty of benefits to us. It makes human more convenient to communicate with the person who is far away from them. Besides, we can acquire a lot of knowledge and get many useful informations from internet. However, one coin has two sides. Internet, phone and computer also take something harmful to us. Some teenagers and adults are addicted to them, which make them be far away from their parents and friends in reality. Someone even gives up studying and working. SO when we use internet to be better,we should also prevent harm from it.

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